This is the poem I submitted to dVerse for the anniversary celebrations and it was entered for the Nain Rouge contest. Mark Durfee of Nain Rouge emailed some weeks later to say:
Your poem MORNING TOWN RIDE made the cut not only to be published in Vol 1 Issue 1 of Nain Rouge, it was also selected by a very qualified group of writers as 1 of the top 6.
I am delighted.
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It was grim on the tube this morning in London, so hot and humid, stinky – this came out of it …
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
like a
toothpaste
tube of the
hunched up,
bunched up,
crunched up,
swilled and
SPIT at
station
drain.
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
oh oh,
get some
mouthwash,
don’t breathe
on me
please;
last night’s
garlic
was good,
last night.
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
finger phones;
manipulate
mobiles
for mails,
thumb apps,
angry birds,
twitter,
overheat,
a mass,
morass
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
of smells,
standing
room only,
read ‘Free
Metro’, or
‘Kindle’,
hang from
bars like
sensible
apes.
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
save
yourself!
bump,
lurch,
sway,
sway,
hear
wheels,
tracks,
screech.
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
iPod,
earbuds,
jiggle,
bleeding tracks,
fan face,
cool down,
heat up,
moist hot
heaps of
humanity …
ride on
morning
town ride.
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
Polly Stretton © 2012