Polly

Writings and Witterings

The Attraction

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Look at his eyes,
What are you looking for?
Look at his body,
Weigh up the opposition.
Look at his smile,
Looking?
At his hands.
Chit-chat,
Interest is mutual,
It’s mutual.

Polly Robinson © 2011

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4 thoughts on “The Attraction

  1. very nicely written.. 🙂

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  2. I like the economy of words here Polly – says so much very succinctly. Love the line about weighing the “opposition” and particularly the ending… maybe because throughout the poem you’re thinking “this could go either way”…

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