Polly

Writings and Witterings

Wind Chimes in Winter

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Deathly clear
icy rime around wind chime
is scentless, thin;
tinkle, travel,
ring, unravel,
cold chills close,
ghostly, grim.

Hark! Pay attention!
Wonder at winter chimes;
blustering, gustering
gale sings,
faster and clearer.
Chimes whirl,
wild, wicked, free.

Polly Stretton © 2011

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2 thoughts on “Wind Chimes in Winter

  1. That was really nice – good rhythm, enough rhyme to keep it interesting, and not too long.

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