Writings and Witterings

Winter morning reflections


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Common Blackbird

She sits on the wooden garden bench, it is 6am in Winter, Spring is around the corner and the birds are in full song.  The dawn chorus floods the air.  Trilling twitters and peaking cheeps, who are these birds?  What make are they?  She has looked them up on the Internet, keen to identify them by their call, but if you don’t know birds, and she knows only a few, like the robin and blackbird, then it is difficult to identify them by the sound they make because one has no starting point.  Trrrrrrr it, trrrrrrr it, toodle oodle, toodle oodle, brrrrr, brrrrr – is that last one cold?  The fat woodpigeon is not awake yet, lazy sod, his unmistakeable call is not here and is noted for its absence.

She sits on the wooden garden bench, it is dry for a while, then a few splats of water arrive on her notepad blurring the writing, now it looks like tlllllll lt, trrlllll it, taadle aadle, taadle addle, blllll, blllll, and they might describe the sounds and they might not.  Still they call.  Who do they call to?  Mild today.  Rain has stopped.  Birds keep calling.  She has a crick in her neck from holding the phone between chin and shoulder, must stop doing that she tells herself daily.

No wind in the trees, no cloud in the purple sky, lilac light coming from the east and filtering through the still leafless trees.  The shed silhouette is black; the apple tree guards it with the birds in the branches trilling for victory.  Or something.

Polly Robinson © 2012


6 thoughts on “Winter morning reflections

  1. You’ve made me want to pay more attention to the birds outside my windows; something I normally never do. 🙂


  2. They’re some cheerful little chappies, well worth a listen – thanks for the comment, Carrie 🙂


  3. this was very good..
    I will pay closer attention to mine!
    Thank you for sharing
    Take Care…


  4. Lovely to see the birds will get your attention, Maryrose, they’re a delight – thank you for commenting 🙂


  5. I love watching the birds in the garden – not quite so keen on dawn chorus! Yesterday I watched a pigeon, four blackbirds and a blue tit – the last five all at the same time! – have baths in the containers of water left out for them.
    Your descriptions of the early morning are vivid and I really enjoyed them. Thank you.


  6. Thanks for your kind words, Lindsay, I’m often up at the crack of dawn and love to see and hear the birds. So glad you liked the piece.


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