He scrabbles in muck,
down on his luck,
a sorrowful sight,
with eyes swollen, tight
from crying
over milk
that was spilt
long ago.
He scrabbles in bins
for his things,
searches for food
in places you’d
rather avoid;
get’s annoyed
when offered help
he doesn’t want.
He scrabbles in brick dust,
crushed, flushed, stuffed
between lath
and plaster,
amongst jaws of
wood that splinters
against a darkening sky,
searching, always searching.
He scrabbles through days,
endless days,
tasteless days,
empty days,
and lays
his head down
at night
in a box,
with eyes swollen, tight
from crying
over milk
spilt.
Polly Stretton © 2012

He scrabbles through wood…by Polly Stretton
20/04/2012 at 05:38
it makes me so sad.
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20/04/2012 at 05:39
Yes, it is sad, a sort of lament.
Thank you for commenting
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20/04/2012 at 06:24
This is so good.
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20/04/2012 at 06:26
You’re an early bird, Ethan!
Glad you like it 🙂
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20/04/2012 at 07:30
Haha, quite the contrary – I’m a night owl. :). It’s 1:30 am over here.
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20/04/2012 at 07:31
Oooh, ‘eck, I keep forgetting about the time differences … it’s now 07:31 here 🙂
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20/04/2012 at 11:16
full of pathos Polly…the last stanza is especially powerful
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20/04/2012 at 13:46
Thank you, Sally, lovely to see you here 🙂
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20/04/2012 at 22:31
Mm, I do like this. Poignant and plaintive.
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21/04/2012 at 07:35
Thank you, Bethany, for your great words
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20/04/2012 at 22:50
Bleak and vivid – I really appreciated it – thank you 🙂
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21/04/2012 at 07:36
It is bleak, thanks for writing, worldly winds
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29/04/2012 at 20:57
Poignant…the last stanza, powerful! 🙂
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29/04/2012 at 21:08
Thank you for visiting and for your comment, Monya.
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17/06/2012 at 11:14
Constructed with a nice, tight rhythm. A compelling character portrait.
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17/06/2012 at 11:30
Thanks Andy – I’ve worked on this one for some time …
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17/06/2012 at 11:19
great sketch of the homeless guy..they have quite the plight…i have a big heart for the cast offs….no matter where i have lived i have found ways to spend time with them…they all have stories…and they are people just like us…only maybe one turn a bit different…
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17/06/2012 at 11:31
agreed, Brian, one can’t help but think ‘there but for the grace of God …’
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17/06/2012 at 12:04
Very sad work. I like the lack of self pity in the character. There is almost a proud nobility to his futile search.
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17/06/2012 at 13:00
Thank you for your thoughts ~ and yes, there is something in the choice of lifestyle perhaps ..?
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17/06/2012 at 12:56
I like the use of scrambling in your verses, specially the last stanza ~
Vivid description of the lost and lonely man ~
A pleasure to meet you ~
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17/06/2012 at 12:59
thank you for your comments ~ good to meet you too ~
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17/06/2012 at 14:27
Polly, I felt my fingers getting dirtier and dirtier with each stanza.
What a description. Really observed or a combination?
Quite something.
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17/06/2012 at 14:50
mmm … combination – the pic is one I found online and seemed the right one for this poem – but of course one observes …
Thanks for your thoughts, aprille
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17/06/2012 at 15:04
Awful, but everywhere. k.
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17/06/2012 at 15:14
K, they are … a sad reflection on society?
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17/06/2012 at 15:40
i wish society made it easier for them to find a way back… some of them don’t want to though.. life broke at a certain point for them and no way to get back to normal…i know about doctors that ended up as a homeless on the street
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17/06/2012 at 15:43
This is part of the problem, I suspect, Claudia, that so many actually do not wish to have a different way of life … but how can we tell?
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18/06/2012 at 17:07
This went down well at last night’s do I thought. 🙂 So brave being the opening act too!
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18/06/2012 at 17:12
Thanks Holly – it can be a bit nerve-wracking being the first on … I had quite a few comments on this poem and on He Drinks Blood and like most of us use those as an indicator – I did think the poetry last night was well-received.
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14/07/2012 at 23:18
Regret can be a miserably haunting obsession, which you have described quite well in “Spilt Milk”…
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14/07/2012 at 23:24
Thanks for your thoughts Lindy.
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