I agree with Brian from dVerse, the Carroll square poem is a beast to do! Samuel Peralta is wicked!
Beyond the Pale
When he moves beyond the pale
He turns towards the darker man;
Moves towards his blood host grimly,
Beyond the blood mist, the gaols,
The darker host, the vampire child.
Pale man grimly gaols child, defiled.
If a Carroll square poem works it can be read right to left and top to bottom. Below, I have spaced it to make reading it top to bottom easier and to show it more clearly:
Polly Robinson © 2012