We sometimes underestimate the local beauty that surrounds us—let’s take the time to look.
All photos by me 🙂
This poem fits the photos.
Autumn Sonnet
Winter comes stealthing… it’s 5am dark,
silent and chilly; August hangs her head.
A wet summer trails to an autumn, stark,
the seasons have become confused, misled.
In light’ning sky sunless clouds leer,
pensive garden, still, holds its breath,
a blowsy brash overblown garb this year,
scents of autumn in a whispered caress.
Look! The birds still want to wake earlier.
Rising sun shifts the dark then wakes us;
dew-laden day assists the courtier
who with the sovereign sun will shake us,
awake.
Polly Stretton © 2012
26/11/2012 at 11:08
More Pantoums I see. Excellent photos too.
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26/11/2012 at 11:23
heh-heh … this was the first pantoum I ever did, so seems a tad stilted to me now … thanks for comments on pics 🙂
Since I wrote this comment I’ve replaced the pantoum with a ten syllable per line autumn poem—the pantoum can be found by keying ‘pantoum’ in the search facility.
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27/11/2012 at 10:41
This ones good too! My though, changing a whole blog post after publication? Ballsy!
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27/11/2012 at 12:02
heh-heh…not something I do lightly…
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27/11/2012 at 12:03
You have your reasons!
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27/11/2012 at 12:08
Indeed. Thanks for your understanding, Joe.
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26/11/2012 at 11:56
Beautiful pictures – hope you haven’t been flooded in your part of the world!
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26/11/2012 at 12:21
Worcestershire is severely flooded, Marina, and it’s not at full flood yet. They say that will happen tomorrow.
We are fortunate to live on one of the highest points just outside Worcester, so are not under threat, but many of our friends have had their houses flooded in the past.
We’re all keeping our fingers crossed that it doesn’t get as bad as it was in 2007.
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26/11/2012 at 14:05
My fingers are crossed for you too!
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26/11/2012 at 19:56
More “Adventures In Form” – and lovely pics to match.
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27/11/2012 at 12:02
Thanks Holly 🙂 x
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26/11/2012 at 23:39
Sovereign sun. Lovely. Just lovely. And, I love photos of roads leading us to the unknown.
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27/11/2012 at 07:57
Me too, Robin. I like photos of archways and gates too…same reason 🙂
Thanks for your comments 🙂
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27/11/2012 at 15:10
I’m also a fan of door photos.
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27/11/2012 at 15:11
Yes, entrances, exits, pathways…things going somewhere…mysteriously excellent 🙂
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27/11/2012 at 01:20
Fall was so gorgeous for us in Ohio this year. Now, however, it’s clear that winter will soon be here. I put up with the winters because I love the falls, but sometimes, in cold and snowy January, it’s easy to forget why I like to live here. 😉
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27/11/2012 at 07:59
We’re in the midst of flooding—they’re supposed to peak today—so many with flooded homes despite the barriers —so, yes, completely understand your comment re ‘easy to forget’
Thanks, Carrie
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27/11/2012 at 02:00
Liked both “Dawn” & “Autumn Sonnet”; pictures quite lovely…
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27/11/2012 at 07:59
Thank you, Lindy 🙂
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27/11/2012 at 02:30
Another lovely pantoum.
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27/11/2012 at 08:00
Cheers m’dear 🙂
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28/11/2012 at 16:22
Beautiful poem to match beautiful photographs – indeed autumn mists and mellow fruitfulness…
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29/11/2012 at 00:17
Ooooh…isn’t it lovely when poets get all lyrical [rhetorical] 🙂
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29/11/2012 at 10:04
Gorgious — local photo slideshow and the poem. Very nice.
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29/11/2012 at 10:10
Thanks Sabio—sometimes we see the beauty elsewhere and don’t look so close to home 🙂
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