Polly

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red Red REd

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Kelvin S.M.

Kelvin S.M.

red Red REd

For dVerse Poets Pub prompt POETICS: DOMINANT IMPRESSION IN ARTISTIC DESCRIPTION by Kelvin S.M.

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47 thoughts on “red Red REd

  1. anger does isolate you know…i like the release i feel in this…if only all anger was as easy to let float away as a balloon eh?

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  2. I enjoyed your way of looking at the picture. It would be good if anger would float away harmlessly and just disappear in the atmosphere forever. Enjoyed your perspective.

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  3. Genius repetition here. Loved this. So full of red and all that goes with it

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  4. very creative way to look at a red balloon…filled with anger…if we could let it drift away, so often it pops! Wonderful Polly!

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  5. Creative format/font of words…This felt like a burst of anger, then drifting away ~

    Grace

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  6. crumpled temper.. I like that a lot

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  7. I love how you play with the word adding an even more 3d affect. Cheers!

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  8. Nicely done Polly! I like your use of capitals here.

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  9. Wow, that was brilliant. A clear statement about anger — lots of information and with incredible creative verse. You show clearly how information and Art are inseparable.

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  10. Ha. Love the alanogy and pace of the piece, the repetion was very kool and I likeed the format. A great combo of words and artwork.

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  11. Hopefully if there’s any bursting from an angry outburst, it will be one’s balloon and not one’s aneurysm…

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  12. Bleared with Bombast, esp great line. k.

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  13. …i agree with the rest… if only our anger could be easily release as how we fly a balloon up high… then i think there would be no need for too much hold of temper & self pity… great thoughts… loved it…smiles…

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  14. Wow–I have never thought of helium as a metaphor for anger, but it so WORKS. Great take on the prompt, Polly.

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  15. Imagine, that picture with your poem in therapists offices everywhere! Well done.

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  16. ah it’s good to let the anger go..very cool metaphor polly

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  17. ‘bleared with bombast’ – great words Polly

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  18. anger, embarrassment, fear all kinds of red flushed emotions would be nice to exhale into balloons.

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  19. A real SPLATTER of words!

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  20. Fabulous Polly. Love the counterbalance of the playfulness of your form and the seriousness of the message. If only anger would just drift away – or be so easily deflated.

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  21. Lovely – very good description of anger, love the balloon metaphor 🙂

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