A shadow of his former self,
my dad, in a hospital bed,
he’d broken his hip and a bit of his mind,
I’ll tell you what he said.
His close-mouthed lips formed these words:
‘Me teeth, me ruddy teeth!’
‘What about them Dad?’ I sighed,
‘Me teeth, me ruddy teeth.’
His face looked loppy-sided,
he didn’t try to grin,
I peered, to find the problem,
for sure, his teeth were in.
‘They’ve give me someone else’s,’
he lisped and almost bristled,
‘Let me see,’ I couldn’t bear
that when he spoke, he whistled.
His teeth were in, but upside-down,
he’d played these games before,
but this one was far preferable
to searching for teeth on the floor.
Polly Stretton © 2020
napowrimo #18
18/04/2020 at 10:56
Bloody fabulous. No other words.
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18/04/2020 at 11:00
heh-heh 🤣 It’s a bit of a giggle and based on a true story! Glad you enjoyed it Elaine 😁
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18/04/2020 at 11:01
Thanks for the giggle on a rainy morning!
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18/04/2020 at 11:02
We need a giggle now and again ‘eh Libby?
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19/04/2020 at 00:14
A good & light poem for my puzzled mind… thank you 🙂
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19/04/2020 at 01:54
*smiles* nice to have something easy-going sometimes ‘eh? 😁 Thanks for commenting.
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12/05/2020 at 16:32
Polly, you painted such a vivid picture with your words. I felt like I was the proverbial fly… 🙂
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12/05/2020 at 19:11
It still makes me giggle 😀
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13/05/2020 at 07:04
Bien sur mon amie! 😉
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13/05/2020 at 08:46
Re-reading your comment, the image of you giggling and the paintbrush in your hand made me wonder if there was a piece of straw between your teeth? 🤣 What an image that is…
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13/05/2020 at 09:03
🤣
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13/05/2020 at 12:10
🤣
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