Mary gave it to me in ’73,
Lauder’s parfum solidifié,
a cameo lid, carved and proud,
a Grecian face, raised, endowed
with curls and plaits
in ivory on terracotta.
Scent set in finely-etched gold.
Mary gave it to me.
Fast forward to 2013, a bad year,
when that thing happened
that all of us fear.
Mary, my friend,
she lost, failed, went.
I don’t forget her,
still use the same scent.
Polly Stretton © 2014
- parfum solidifié
- inside the compact
09/11/2014 at 21:49
Beautifully written Polly, very touching 😥
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09/11/2014 at 22:28
Even without the photo I could imagine the perfume locket. Your description was wonderful.
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10/11/2014 at 07:52
It’s such a pretty thing, I thought I’d add the photos (which hadn’t been taken when I first posted the poem). The poem came out of a challenge set at the OU Poets weekend in Devon – I got back late afternoon – there may be a few more to come 🙂
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09/11/2014 at 22:35
Touching.
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10/11/2014 at 11:41
Thank you.
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10/11/2014 at 10:41
Scent is a powerful memory trigger. I hope you are able to remember the good and not just the sadness. Léa xx
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10/11/2014 at 10:55
Always remember the good times, Léa, we brought our children up together – the dearest of friends.
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10/11/2014 at 11:54
That is a treasure indeed!
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10/11/2014 at 15:11
good to see it here Polly. Enchanting
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10/11/2014 at 15:15
Thanks for commenting, Di. 🙂
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10/11/2014 at 17:49
A beautiful tribute to your friend Polly. I think perfume and music are the two strongest triggers for memories, both sad and happy. X
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10/11/2014 at 23:18
Thanks Christine – I think it’s true that perfume and music are especially strong triggers.
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10/11/2014 at 20:18
A touching tribute. I love it. Perfume can really reach those feelings and memories.
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10/11/2014 at 23:18
Cheers Alex, glad you liked it – scent is so evocative.
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