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Dad always did like Pam Ayres

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For my loved and much-missed dad on Father’s Day.

Eric Dudley Dawkins at his Grandson's wedding

Dad always did like Pam Ayres

A shadow of his former self,
my dad, in a hospital bed,
he’d broken his hip and a bit of his mind,
I’ll tell you what he said.

His close-mouthed lips formed these words:
‘Me teeth, me ruddy teeth!’
     ‘What about them Dad?’ I sighed,
‘Me teeth, me ruddy teeth.’

His face looked loppy-sided,
he didn’t try to grin,
I peered, to find the problem,
for sure, his teeth were in.

‘They’ve give me someone else’s,’
he lisped, with an air of dismissal,
     ‘Let me see,’ it made me smile
that when he spoke, he whistled.

His teeth were in, but upside-down,
he’d played these games before,
I liked this one a lot better
than searching for teeth on the floor!

Polly Stretton © 2018

3 thoughts on “Dad always did like Pam Ayres

  1. A lovely way to remember your dad. Reminds me that I also wrote one for mine 😊 https://weavingyarns1.wordpress.com/2016/10/17/dad-was-a-fan-of-the-archers/

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  2. Hello Polly reminds me of my father who in old age, had a bit of his mind broke.  Strong words. Best wishes, Kevin OUP.

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