We live in canvas bells for five days’
sweat-clammy shelter,
hot in fields of hay,
as a great war rages.
Anne and I become snake
and snake charmer around a smoky campfire.
The menfolk ‘on the front’
– some of our dads –
kill.
My dad’s a Local Defence Volunteer. He has a gun.
We have a singsong, Pack Up Your Troubles for wide-eyed mothers,
nurses, head-scarved land girls,
and munitions factory workers, canary-faced women
who feast on fat pork spitting
splitting sausages that stay
on the tongue with charred onion breath, for hours.
We wonder what it’s like
on the bloody muddy Western front.
Will jam jars and cotton reels really help?
If You Were The Only Girl In The World…
our mothers’ eyes shine.
Big blue-garbed Girl Guides
tease us because we’re brown
– few gongs yet –
Me, arms akimbo, in a khaki sleeping bag;
writhing, serpentine, up and down,
side to side,
while Anne tootles, fluting on her recorder,
face dark with gravy browning.
In the trenches guns shatter eardrums, pop eyeballs, make mush of bones.
The big girls give out rubbery gas masks
– hard to breathe –
they send messages using small flags;
wrinkle soapy fingers in hospitals; lather and launder dressings;
roll bandages; prep stretchers for bleeding bodies.
We collect warm hens’ eggs, harvest cabbages and keep our chins up,
knit socks and scarves for the Tommies,
and hope our mums don’t get a telegram.
Polly Stretton © 2014
This poem was published in Remember, the Paragram Poetry Anthology 2014, I mentioned this in conversation with my friend, Mike Alma, who has sent me the photo below to show what the Girl Guides looked like in the early 20th century. Many thanks Mike. Here is Mike’s photo of Doris and Peg, bet they loved camping.
02/02/2015 at 18:30
The uniform hasn’t changed much huh! I’m still reading your poem over and over, imaging everything on my mind, what a post!
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02/02/2015 at 18:54
It doesn’t look as though the uniform’s have changed much, ‘eh Andy 🙂 Love that you’re re-reading and imagining everything…wonderful 🙂
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02/02/2015 at 19:01
That they haven’t! 🙂 And with your words, how can anyone not feel like they are standing there and watching it all 🙂
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02/02/2015 at 18:51
So much detail in this poem. Such a story you told in a small amount of words.
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02/02/2015 at 18:54
Thanks Carrie – lots of work in this one, but worth it, I think 🙂
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03/02/2015 at 10:15
The narrative in this poem takes the reader right into the actions, reactions and emotions of the era Polly. Very much liked thank you.
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03/02/2015 at 10:25
I am pleased to see your comments on this one, Mike, thank you.
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03/02/2015 at 11:07
My Mum was a girl guide between the wars and in the land army in WWII. Your poem evoked this era so well. It also brought the camping experience to life – I could smell the hay – and the inconsequential/so consequential detail makes it all real. And then the poignant juxta-position of “…bleeding bodies,” and the safe domestic image of “warm hens’ eggs. This is the stuff Polly.
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03/02/2015 at 12:48
So evocative, the fragrance of hay…nice to see the juxtapositions worked for you too, John – thanks for the comments.
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03/02/2015 at 20:29
This is fabulous Polly, you painted a great picture, it was such a vivid scene. Just lovely. I’ve read it a few times over.
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03/02/2015 at 22:21
Thanks Christine…I’ve just spotted on Facebook that you’ve got a book out…don’t know how I missed it, but will be ordering it as soon as I’ve broken into my piggybank 🙂
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04/02/2015 at 10:18
The first book called Journey into Poetry was one I just had printed for family and friends two years ago and because it was cheaper to have lots printed than a few I have several spare copies which I am giving in exchange for a donation to my JustGiving page. The new book is being published by Bennison Books (very chuffed 😊) and will be on Amazon very soon.
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04/02/2015 at 10:37
Excellent, do let me know when that happens 🙂
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04/02/2015 at 06:50
Polly, a veritable feast for ALL the senses! I could taste, touch, smell, hear and even see in my mind the goings on. The Land Girls is a newer concept for me. I hadn’t ever heard of them in the states but since coming to France I have seen programs and even had a friend whose mother was a Land Girl. Good work and perhaps a labour of love? 🙂
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04/02/2015 at 07:00
Thanks Léa, good to see you like this one, and how interesting that Land Girls are fairly new to you. One of our next door neighbours was a Land Girl and very proud of it.
The poem is a spin off from another poem and I worked on it, let it rest, worked on it again and again before submitting it to Paragram. It is good to see that my blogging friends are enjoying it.
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04/02/2015 at 07:08
Polly, it was a treat! I look forward to reading it again but right now I’m filled with sausages! 😉
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04/02/2015 at 07:09
heh-heh…happy breakfasting to you 😀
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04/02/2015 at 07:11
Bon appétit!
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18/02/2015 at 22:44
‘Pack up your troubles for wide eyed mothers’ fabulous line. Reminds me of Kate Bush Army Dreamers.
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18/02/2015 at 22:48
Ah…”Mammy’s hero”…I get that…
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12/03/2015 at 10:31
we always have to remember that even during the shadow of war, people live and have moments of joy.
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17/03/2015 at 11:39
Thank you for commenting on this poem Björn – I’m delighted to say that I’m back in the land of broadband / wifi – so will be able to join in with dVerse once more – looking forward to seeing how the new team are doing 🙂
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