
English: Congestion on the London Underground
As it’s nearly Christmas, here’s a special treat. A slight re-write of one of my favourite poems, and it seems, yours—it was selected for and published in the first edition of Nain Rouge and again in Girl’s Got Rhythm.
Morning Town Ride
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
Like a
toothpaste
tube of the
hunched up,
bunched up,
crunched up,
swilled and
SPIT at
station
drain.
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
Oh oh,
get some
mouthwash.
Don’t breathe
on me
please;
last night’s
garlic
was good,
last night.
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
Finger phones,
mobiles,
mails,
thumb apps,
flickr,
angry birds,
twitter.
Overheat,
a mass,
morass
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
of smells.
Standing
room only.
Balance,
read ‘Free
Metro’, or
‘Kindle’.
Hang from
bars like
sensible
apes (phew!)
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
Save
yourself!
bump,
lurch,
sway,
sway.
Hear
wheels,
tracks,
screech.
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
iPod,
earbuds,
bleeding tracks,
jiggle.
Fan face,
cool down,
heat up,
moist hot
heaps of
humanity …
ride …
On …
morning
town ride.
chackety chack
chackety chack
chackety chack
Polly Stretton © 2012
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